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==Other== | ==Other== | ||
*In the [[Hentai@Home]] Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary | *In the [[Hentai@Home]] Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary | ||
==Galleries== | ==Galleries== | ||
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<!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | <!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | ||
*[[The Shrine]] - Says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]] | *[[The Shrine]] - Says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]] | ||
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree | *The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree | ||
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | *[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | ||
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===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - "'''price'''"; should be "prize" | *[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - "'''price'''"; should be "prize" | ||
*Infused Divinity - On the [[weapon]] enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space | *Infused Divinity - On the [[weapon]] enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space | ||
Revision as of 09:48, 6 October 2013
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
Forums
Other
- In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary
Galleries
- The GP Exchange is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
- In the My Settings page the Multi-Page Viewer claims to require Hath Perk: "Quick Browse"; should be "Multi-Page Viewer"
- The ToS permits Asian Porn (twice), says "histrory"; should be removed and "history"
HentaiVerse
- Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
- Monster Lab - Other Stats does not list Attack Speed
- The Shrine - Says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's level
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards
Spells
- Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't
Items
- Raptor Jesus - "price"; should be "prize"
- Infused Divinity - On the weapon enchantment screen says "...with theelemental holy..."; missing a space
- Monster Edibles - "something slighly more palatable"; should be "slightly"
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
- The price of Bunny-Girl Costume trophies in the bazaar is the lowest; should be Lock of Blue Hair
Abilities
- SP Tank says 5% per rank; should be 10%
