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==Galleries==
==Galleries==
*The [[GP Exchange]] is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
*The [[GP Exchange]] is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
*In the My Settings page the Multi-Page Viewer claims to require [[Hath Perk]]: Quick Browse; should be Multi-Page Viewer.
*In the My Settings page the Multi-Page Viewer claims to require [[Hath Perk]]: "Quick Browse"; should be "Multi-Page Viewer"


==HentaiVerse==
==HentaiVerse==

Revision as of 14:46, 30 June 2013

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

Forums

Other

  • In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary

Galleries

  • The GP Exchange is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
  • In the My Settings page the Multi-Page Viewer claims to require Hath Perk: "Quick Browse"; should be "Multi-Page Viewer"

HentaiVerse

  • Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
  • Monster Lab - Other Stats does not list Attack Speed
  • The Shrine - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's level
  • Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu?
  • The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they do apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
  • Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds

Spells

  • Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't

Items

  • Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
  • Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading
  • Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
  • Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
  • Raptor Jesus - "price"; should be "prize"
  • Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with theelemental holy..."; missing a space
  • Monster Edibles - "something slighly more palatable"; should be "slightly"
  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
  • The price of Bunny-Girl Costume trophies in the bazaar is the lowest; should be Lock of Blue Hair

Abilities

  • SP Tank says 5% per rank; should be 10%