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==HentaiVerse== | ==HentaiVerse== | ||
<!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | <!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | ||
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree | *The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree. | ||
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | *[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds. | ||
*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste) | *Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste). | ||
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters): | *Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters): | ||
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup> | **Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''.<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup> | ||
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling) | **Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling). | ||
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes''' | **Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes''' | ||
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well." is misleading. Undead | **Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well." is misleading. Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation. | ||
**(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore | **(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore | ||
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards | *The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards. | ||
*When offering [[trophies]] at the [[Shrine]], the description says "The '''qualify''' of the item depends..."; should be '''quality'''. | *When offering [[trophies]] at the [[Shrine]], the description says "The '''qualify''' of the item depends..."; should be '''quality'''. | ||
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none. | *The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none. | ||
===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players | *Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players. | ||
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup> | *Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun.<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup> | ||
*The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs | *The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs. | ||
Revision as of 15:00, 7 April 2014
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
E-Hentai
- The Dawn message stopped using commas for credit amounts (compare before and after)
- Some users' mod power from tagging shows +-0; signed zeroes are a confusing notation for users
Forums
- The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
Galleries
HentaiVerse
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially.[1]
- Sprite: faery; should be fairy (much more common spelling).
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
- Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well." is misleading. Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation.
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
- When offering trophies at the Shrine, the description says "The qualify of the item depends..."; should be quality.
- The ability Sorcery states that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
- Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun.[2]
- The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the Bazaar's Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.
