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*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup>
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup>
*The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs

Revision as of 23:00, 18 February 2014

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

E-Hentai

  • The Dawn message stopped using commas for credit amounts (compare before and after)
  • Some users' mod power from tagging shows +-0; signed zeroes are a confusing notation for users

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)

Galleries

HentaiVerse

  • The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
  • Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
  • Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
  • Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
    • Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially[1]
    • Sprite: faery; should be fairy (much more common spelling)
    • Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
    • (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
  • The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards
  • When offering trophies at the Shrine, the description says "The qualify of the item depends..."; should be quality.

Items

  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
  • Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun[2]
  • The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the Bazaar's Item Shop or the Inventory UIs