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==HentaiVerse== | ==HentaiVerse== | ||
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade" | *[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade" | ||
*[[Monster Lab]] - | *[[Monster Lab]] - Other Stats does not list Attack Speed | ||
* | <!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | ||
*[[The Shrine]] - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]] | *[[The Shrine]] - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]] | ||
*Niten | *Niten Ichiryu'''u''' or Niten Ichiryu? | ||
*The tooltips for the Goddess/Yggdrasil procs are somewhat misleading | *The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they do apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree | ||
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | *[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | ||
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*[[Crystal]] of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading | *[[Crystal]] of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading | ||
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards | *Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards | ||
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - | *[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - "'''price'''"; should be "prize" | ||
*Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space | *Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space | ||
*Monster Edibles - "something '''slighly''' more palatable"; should be "slightly" | *Monster Edibles - "something '''slighly''' more palatable"; should be "slightly" | ||
Revision as of 17:14, 27 June 2013
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
Forums
Other
In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary.
Galleries
- The GP Exchange is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
HentaiVerse
- Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
- Monster Lab - Other Stats does not list Attack Speed
- The Shrine - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's level
- Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu?
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they do apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
Spells
- Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't
Items
- Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
- Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading
- Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
- Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
- Raptor Jesus - "price"; should be "prize"
- Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with theelemental holy..."; missing a space
- Monster Edibles - "something slighly more palatable"; should be "slightly"
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
- The price of Bunny-Girl Costume trophies in the bazaar is the lowest; should be Lock of Blue Hair
Abilities
- SP Tank says 5% per rank; should be 10%
