Proofreading

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This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

E-Hentai

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
  • The automatized posting of bounties to the forum uses <br />; the forums do not support that form of line break.

Galleries

  • The gallery update message for old galleries says three months; should be twelve.

HentaiVerse

  • The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
  • Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
  • Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
  • Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
    • Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially.
    • Sprite: faery; should probably be fairy (much more common spelling).
    • Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes.
    • Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.
    • (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore.
  • The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
  • The ability Sorcery states that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
  • The Enchant section states MoggleMail; should be MoogleMail.
  • The Upgrade page states "Hover an upgrade"; should be Hover over an upgrade.

Items

  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
  • Konata's Hair - Description says timotei; should be Timotei as it's a proper noun.
  • The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the Bazaar's Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.

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