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==[[HentaiVerse]]==
==[[HentaiVerse]]==
*The tooltips for [[Enemy Procs#Arena Challenge - The Trio and The Tree|the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs]] are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
*[[Enemy Procs#Arena Challenge - The Trio and The Tree|The Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs]] - The tooltips for them are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
*[[Grindfest]] - Description implies that it is '''endless'''; it ends at '''1,000 rounds'''.
*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*[[Abilities]] - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
*Combat Log - Refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as '''[[Arena]]''' clear rewards.
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/ especially]'''.
*The Sorcery [[ability]] - States that it '''reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns'''; they have none.
*The [[Enchant]] page - "'''MoggleMail'''"; should be "'''MoogleMail'''".
*The [[Upgrade]] page - "'''Hover an''' upgrade"; should be Hover '''over''' an upgrade.
*[[Monster Lab]] - Monster class descriptions:
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted"; should be '''[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/ especially]'''.
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should probably be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling).
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should probably be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling).
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''.
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''.
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.  
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.  
**(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore.
**(''Numerous''): Make references to '''soul damage'''; this does not exist anymore.
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards.
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none.
*The [[Enchant]] section states '''MoggleMail'''; should be '''MoogleMail'''.
*The [[Upgrade]] page states "'''Hover an''' upgrade"; should be Hover '''over''' an upgrade.


===[[Items]]===
===[[Items]]===
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher [[level]] monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players.
*Konata's Hair - Description says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''' as it is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei a proper noun].
*Konata's Hair - Description says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''' as [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei it's a proper noun].
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher '''[[level]]''' monsters; should be "'''[[power level]]'''" to avoid misleading players.
*The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.
*Item Shop Bot UI - The order of the items listed for it does not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.


==See also==
==See also==

Revision as of 14:56, 29 January 2015

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

E-Hentai

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
  • The automatized posting of bounties to the forum uses <br />; the forums do not support that form of line break.

Galleries

  • The gallery update message for old galleries says three months; should be twelve.

HentaiVerse

  • The Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs - The tooltips for them are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
  • Grindfest - Description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
  • Abilities - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
  • Combat Log - Refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
  • The Sorcery ability - States that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
  • The Enchant page - "MoggleMail"; should be "MoogleMail".
  • The Upgrade page - "Hover an upgrade"; should be Hover over an upgrade.
  • Monster Lab - Monster class descriptions:
    • Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted"; should be especially.
    • Sprite: faery; should probably be fairy (much more common spelling).
    • Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes.
    • Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.
    • (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore.

Items

  • Konata's Hair - Description says timotei; should be Timotei as it is a proper noun.
  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
  • Item Shop Bot UI - The order of the items listed for it does not match the order of the Bazaar's Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.

See also

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