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==E-Hentai== | ==E-Hentai== | ||
*The [[Dawn]] message stopped using commas for [[credit]] amounts (compare [[Media:DawnM1.png|before]] and [[Media:DawnM2.png|after]]) | *The [[Dawn]] message stopped using commas for [[credit]] amounts (compare [[Media:DawnM1.png|before]] and [[Media:DawnM2.png|after]]). | ||
==[[Forums]]== | ==[[Forums]]== | ||
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==[[HentaiVerse]]== | ==[[HentaiVerse]]== | ||
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree. | *The tooltips for [[Enemy Procs#Arena Challenge - The Trio and The Tree|the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs]] are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree. | ||
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds. | *[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds. | ||
*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste). | *Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste). | ||
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters): | *Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters): | ||
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be ''' | **Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/ especially]'''. | ||
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling). | **Sprite: '''faery'''; should probably be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling). | ||
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''. | **Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''. | ||
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation. | **Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation. | ||
**(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore. | **(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore. | ||
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards. | *The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards. | ||
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===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - | *Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher [[level]] monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players. | ||
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''' | *Konata's Hair - Description says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''' as [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei it's a proper noun]. | ||
*The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs. | *The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs. | ||
Revision as of 14:39, 29 November 2014
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
E-Hentai
Forums
- The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
- The automatized posting of bounties to the forum uses <br />; the forums do not support that form of line break.
Galleries
HentaiVerse
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially.
- Sprite: faery; should probably be fairy (much more common spelling).
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes.
- Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore.
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
- The ability Sorcery states that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
- The Enchant section states MoggleMail; should be MoogleMail.
- The Upgrade page states "Hover an upgrade"; should be Hover over an upgrade.
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
- Konata's Hair - Description says timotei; should be Timotei as it's a proper noun.
- The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the Bazaar's Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.
