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==HentaiVerse== | ==HentaiVerse== | ||
<!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | <!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? --> | ||
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are | *The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree | ||
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | *[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds | ||
*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste) | *Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste) | ||
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) | *Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters): | ||
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup> | **Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup> | ||
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' | **Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling) | ||
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes''' | **Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes''' | ||
**(Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore | **(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore | ||
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as [[Arena]] clear rewards | *The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards | ||
*When offering [[ | *When offering [[trophies]] at the [[Shrine]], the description says "The '''qualify''' of the item depends..."; should be '''quality'''. | ||
===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players | *Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players | ||
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup> | *Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup> | ||
Revision as of 21:49, 19 January 2014
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HentaiVerse
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially[1]
- Sprite: faery; should be fairy (much more common spelling)
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards
- When offering trophies at the Shrine, the description says "The qualify of the item depends..."; should be quality.
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
- Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun[2]
