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==HentaiVerse==
==HentaiVerse==
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
*[[Monster Lab]] - Other Stats does not list Attack Speed
<!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? -->
<!-- *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? -->
*[[The Shrine]] - Says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]]
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
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*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as [[Arena]] clear rewards
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as [[Arena]] clear rewards
===[[Spells]]===
*Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't


===[[Items]]===
===[[Items]]===
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - "'''price'''"; should be "prize"
*Infused Divinity - On the [[weapon]] enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space
*Monster Edibles - "something '''slighly''' more palatable"; should be "slightly"
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
*The price of Bunny-Girl Costume [[trophies]] in the [[bazaar]] is the lowest; should be Lock of Blue Hair
===[[Abilities]]===
*SP Tank says 5% per rank; should be 10%

Revision as of 11:01, 7 October 2013

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

Forums

Other

  • In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary

Galleries

  • The GP Exchange is named "The GP Exchange II: Revengeance"; there was technically never a GP Exchange I (that involved other users)
  • In the My Settings page the Multi-Page Viewer claims to require Hath Perk: "Quick Browse"; should be "Multi-Page Viewer"
  • The ToS permits Asian Porn (twice), says "histrory"; should be removed and "history"

HentaiVerse

  • The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
  • Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
  • Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
  • Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors
  • The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards

Items

  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
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