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==[[HentaiVerse]]==
==[[HentaiVerse]]==
*[[Enemy Procs#Arena Challenge - The Trio and The Tree|The Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs]] - The tooltips for them are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
*[[Grindfest]] - Description implies that it is '''endless'''; it ends at '''1,000 rounds'''.
*[[Abilities]] - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*[[Abilities]] - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*Combat Log - Refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as '''[[Arena]]''' clear rewards.
*The Sorcery [[ability]] - States that it '''reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns'''; they have none.
*The [[Enchant]] page - "'''MoggleMail'''"; should be "'''MoogleMail'''".
*The [[Upgrade]] page - "'''Hover an''' upgrade"; should be "Hover '''over''' an upgrade".
*[[Monster Lab]] - Monster class descriptions:
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted"; should be '''[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/ especially]'''.
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should probably be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling).
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''.
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have +25 Crushing Mitigation.
**(''Numerous''): Make references to '''soul damage'''; this does not exist anymore.
===[[Items]]===
*Konata's Hair - Description says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''' as it is [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei a proper noun].
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Description implies that they are for higher '''[[level]]''' monsters; should be "'''[[power level]]'''" to avoid misleading players.
*Item Shop Bot UI - The order of the items listed for it does not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.


==See also==
==See also==

Revision as of 13:21, 7 July 2015

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

E-Hentai

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
  • The automatized posting of bounties to the forum uses <br />; the forums do not support that form of line break.
  • The DNP post implies that Asian Porn is still permitted.

Galleries

  • The gallery update message for old galleries says three months; should be twelve.
  • The More Pages Hath Perks erroneously state that "Images loaded through Hentai@Home do not count towards this limit."
  • The Bounty System interface states "In order to claim a bounty, you have to post a deposit of 10,000 Credits"; the actual requirement is 1,000 Credits.
  • The Commenting error message for posting too quickly says "You have to wait 60 seconds between each comment." regardless of the user's mod power; should be 10 seconds at 25 mod power or more.
    • This may be a static text which cannot dynamically react to a user's power.

HentaiVerse

  • Abilities - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).

See also

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