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*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players | *Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players | ||
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', it's a proper noun<sup>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei]</sup> | |||
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This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
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- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors (which?)
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially[1]
- Sprite: faery; should be fairy? (the former is permitted but a very uncommon spelling)
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards
- When offering trophies at the shrine, the description says "The qualify of the item depends on the..."; should be quality.
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
- Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun[2]
