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*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed | *[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed | ||
*<s>[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones</s>? | *<s>[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones</s>? | ||
*[[The Shrine]] - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each | *[[The Shrine]] - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's [[level]] | ||
*[[Leveling]] - The combat log says the player has gained an Aura point after reach a 10th level; should say Mastery | *[[Leveling]] - The combat log says the player has gained an Aura point after reach a 10th level; should say Mastery | ||
*Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu? | *Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu? | ||
Revision as of 17:33, 1 June 2013
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
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In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary.
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HentaiVerse
- Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
- Monster Lab - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
Equipment - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones?- The Shrine - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each; should say 10% of the player's level
- Leveling - The combat log says the player has gained an Aura point after reach a 10th level; should say Mastery
- Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu?
Spells
- Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't
Items
- Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
- Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading
- Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"?- Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
- Raptor Jesus - Description says "price"; should be "prize"
- Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with theelemental holy..."; missing a space
- Monster Edibles - "something slighly more palatable"; should be "slightly"
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
