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*<s>Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"</s>?
*<s>Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"</s>?
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description says "'''price'''"; should be "prize"
*Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the Weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."
*Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."; missing a space
*Monster Edibles - "something '''slighly''' more palatable"; should be "slightly"
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players


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Revision as of 18:51, 22 May 2013

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

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In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary.

Galleries

HentaiVerse

  • Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
  • Monster Lab - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
  • Equipment - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones?
  • The Shrine - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each
  • Leveling - The combat log says the player has gained an Aura point after reach a 10th level; should say Mastery
  • Niten Ichiryuu or Niten Ichiryu?

Spells

  • Arcane Focus and Heartseeker claim to improve accuracy; they don't

Items

  • Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
  • Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading
  • Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
  • Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"?
  • Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
  • Raptor Jesus - Description says "price"; should be "prize"
  • Infused Divinity - On the Weapon Enchantment screen says "...with theelemental holy..."; missing a space
  • Monster Edibles - "something slighly more palatable"; should be "slightly"
  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players

Abilities