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==HentaiVerse==
==HentaiVerse==
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
*Spiritual Proficiency - Will not show to 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
*[[Proficiency]] - Spiritual does not show to 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] trophy - Description should say "prize" rather than "price"
*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
*The [[Forge]] - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case
*[[Equipment]] - The tiers are listed in inconsistent order. Cloth is Cotton-Gossamer-Phase (1-2-3), Light is Kevlar-Leather-Shade (2-1-3), Heavy is Plate-Power-Shield (1-3-2), Staffs are Ebony-Katalox-Oak-Redwood-Willow (2-3-1-1-1), 1-Handed is 2-2-1-2-1-3
*[[Auras]] - Black, White, and Rainbows still have a tooltips indicating that they do not consume any aura slots (which no longer exist)
 
===[[Items]]===
*Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
*Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
*Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."
===[[Abilities]]===
*Absorb - States that additional AP increases the duration of the spell
*Arcane Focus & Heartseeker - States that they increases accuracy
*All X-Abilities - Still state 25% improved action speed when it should be 10%
*Protection (both [[ability]] and [[spell]]) - Still lists its effect as based on armor
*Protection (both [[ability]] and [[spell]]) - Still lists its effect as based on armor
*Monster's Bonus Stats - Does not list Attack Speed
*All X-Abilities - Still state 25% improved action speed when it should be 10%
*Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."
*Shielding Rune - Still says it's required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
*Equipment listings - the tiers are listed in inconsistent order.  Cloth is Cotton-Gossamer-Phase (1-2-3), Light armor is Kevlar-Leather-Shade (2-1-3), Heavy is Plate-Power-Shield (1-3-2), Staves are Ebony-Katalox-Oak-Redwood-Willow (2-3-1-1-1), 1H is 2-2-1-2-1-3.
*The Forge - the first letter of each line in the explanatory texts being capitalized looks odd.
*Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"
*[[Auras]] - Black, White, and Rainbows still have a tooltip indicating that they do not consume any aura slots (which no longer exist).
*Absorb [[ability]] - States that additional AP increases the duration of the spell.
*Arcane Focus & Heartseeker [[abilities]] - States that they increases accuracy.

Revision as of 18:54, 14 May 2013

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HentaiVerse

  • Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
  • Proficiency - Spiritual does not show to 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
  • Monster Lab - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
  • The Forge - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case
  • Equipment - The tiers are listed in inconsistent order. Cloth is Cotton-Gossamer-Phase (1-2-3), Light is Kevlar-Leather-Shade (2-1-3), Heavy is Plate-Power-Shield (1-3-2), Staffs are Ebony-Katalox-Oak-Redwood-Willow (2-3-1-1-1), 1-Handed is 2-2-1-2-1-3
  • Auras - Black, White, and Rainbows still have a tooltips indicating that they do not consume any aura slots (which no longer exist)

Items

  • Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
  • Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"
  • Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
  • Raptor Jesus - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
  • Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with theelemental holy..."

Abilities

  • Absorb - States that additional AP increases the duration of the spell
  • Arcane Focus & Heartseeker - States that they increases accuracy
  • All X-Abilities - Still state 25% improved action speed when it should be 10%
  • Protection (both ability and spell) - Still lists its effect as based on armor