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*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards. | *The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards. | ||
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none. | *The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none. | ||
*The [[Enchant]] section says '''MoggleMail'''; should be '''MoogleMail'''. | |||
===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
Revision as of 17:03, 13 June 2014
This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.
E-Hentai
- The Dawn message stopped using commas for credit amounts (compare before and after)
- Some users' mod power from tagging shows +-0; signed zeroes are a confusing notation for users
Forums
- The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)
Galleries
HentaiVerse
- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially.[1]
- Sprite: faery; should be fairy (much more common spelling).
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
- Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well." is misleading. Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation.
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
- The ability Sorcery states that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
- The Enchant section says MoggleMail; should be MoogleMail.
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
- Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun.[2]