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*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards.
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards.
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none.
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none.
*The [[Enchant]] section says '''MoggleMail'''; should be '''MoogleMail'''.


===[[Items]]===
===[[Items]]===

Revision as of 17:03, 13 June 2014

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

E-Hentai

  • The Dawn message stopped using commas for credit amounts (compare before and after)
  • Some users' mod power from tagging shows +-0; signed zeroes are a confusing notation for users

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's 65,531 (?)

Galleries

HentaiVerse

  • The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
  • Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
  • Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
  • Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
    • Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially.[1]
    • Sprite: faery; should be fairy (much more common spelling).
    • Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
    • Undead: "...crushing or cutting off limbs works reasonably well." is misleading. Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation.
    • (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
  • The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards.
  • The ability Sorcery states that it reduces T1 spell cooldowns; they have none.
  • The Enchant section says MoggleMail; should be MoogleMail.

Items

  • Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players.
  • Konata's Hair - says timotei; should be Timotei, it's a proper noun.[2]