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==HentaiVerse==
==HentaiVerse==
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
*The [[Forge]] - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case
*The [[Forge]] - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case

Revision as of 16:26, 18 May 2013

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

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In the Hentai@Home Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary.

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HentaiVerse

  • Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
  • Monster Lab - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
  • The Forge - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case
  • Equipment - The tiers are listed in inconsistent order. Cloth is Cotton-Gossamer-Phase (1-2-3), Light is Kevlar-Leather-Shade (2-1-3), Heavy is Plate-Power-Shield (1-3-2), Staffs are Ebony-Katalox-Oak-Redwood-Willow (2-3-1-1-1), 1-Handed is 2-2-1-2-1-3

Items

  • Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
  • Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
  • Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"
  • Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
  • Raptor Jesus - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
  • Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with theelemental holy..."

Abilities