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*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste) | *Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste) | ||
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors (which?) | *Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors (which?) | ||
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup> | |||
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy'''? (the former is permitted but a very uncommon spelling) | |||
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes''' | |||
**(Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore | |||
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as [[Arena]] clear rewards | *The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as [[Arena]] clear rewards | ||
===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players | *Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players | ||
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- The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are somewhat misleading; they apply to all monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree
- Grindfest's description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds
- Various tooltips do not update based on abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste)
- Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters) have various spelling errors (which?)
- Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not specially enchanted to withstand it"; should be especially[1]
- Sprite: faery; should be fairy? (the former is permitted but a very uncommon spelling)
- Sprite: "Their tiny size also make them difficult to hit them"; should be makes
- (Numerous): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore
- The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the Ring of Blood as Arena clear rewards
Items
- Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher level monsters; should be "power level" to avoid misleading players
