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*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade" | *[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade" | ||
*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed | *[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed | ||
* | *[[Equipment]] - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones? | ||
*[[ | *[[The Shrine]] - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each. | ||
===[[Items]]=== | ===[[Items]]=== | ||
*Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading | *Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading | ||
*Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading | |||
*[[Crystal]] of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading | *[[Crystal]] of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading | ||
*Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding" | *Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"? | ||
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards | *Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards | ||
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description should say "prize"; says "price" | *[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description should say "prize"; says "price" | ||
*Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the | *Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the Weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..." | ||
===[[Abilities]]=== | ===[[Abilities]]=== | ||
===[[Training]]=== | |||
*And A Scolar - Should be "Scholar" | |||
Revision as of 13:54, 19 May 2013
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- Titles - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"
- Monster Lab - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
- Equipment - Some obsolete tiers are listed in inconsistent order compared to the existing ones?
- The Shrine - Still says that primary attributes are limited to 20 each.
Items
- Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
- Kevlar Piece - Still says it is required to reforge Kevlar armor; this is misleading
- Crystal of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
- Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"?
- Voidseeker Shard - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
- Raptor Jesus - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
- Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the Weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with theelemental holy..."
Abilities
Training
- And A Scolar - Should be "Scholar"
