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''This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.''
''This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.''


==Forums==
==[[EHWiki]]==
*Hundreds of E-H links point to http://g.e; should be '''https://e'''
**Several forum links are also missing HTTPS.


==Other==
==[[Forums]]==
In the [[Hentai@Home]] Clients page the top region is stated to be "North- and South America"; the hyphen is not necessary.
*The error message "The maximum allowed length is '''102400''' characters." is false; it's roughly '''65500''' (depends on whitespaces used, etc.)
*<s>The Invisible Power Broads © IPS, Inc. link goes to '''http://www.invisionboard.com/''' (defunct); should be '''https://www.invisionpower.com/'''</s>
*When Snowflake sends out Monthly Toplist Awards she refers to each item as a '''Ticket'''; should be '''Coupon'''.


==Galleries==
==[[Galleries]]==
*[https://e-hentai.org/tos.php Term of Service] - "Post '''photograpic''' material"; should be '''photographic'''.
*[[Hath Perks]] - Ads-Be-Gone - Can no longer be toggled.
*The tooltip for https://ehgt.org/g/e.png on a gallery listing states "This gallery is expunged, '''deleted''' or replaced"; should not include '''deleted''' as those cannot be searched.
*[[Archiver]] error message - "'''I''' will now wait for this file to finish"; should be '''It'''.


==HentaiVerse==
==[[HentaiVerse]]==
*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on Destined and Godslayer after the word "Evade"  
*[[Abilities]] - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*[[Monster Lab]] - The Bonus Stats pane do not list Attack Speed
**Description of 2H Parry stays: "Increases your '''block''' when using the Two-Handed or Niten fighting style, scaling with your proficiency"; should be '''parry'''.
*The [[Forge]] - The first letter of each line in the explanatory texts is Proper Case
**Some abilities use "'''increases/decreases'''", while other use "'''increase/decrease'''"; should be the same to match the tense.
*[[Equipment]] - The tiers are listed in inconsistent order. Cloth is Cotton-Gossamer-Phase (1-2-3), Light is Kevlar-Leather-Shade (2-1-3), Heavy is Plate-Power-Shield (1-3-2), Staffs are Ebony-Katalox-Oak-Redwood-Willow (2-3-1-1-1), 1-Handed is 2-2-1-2-1-3
**Some description use "crit" term, while other "'''critical'''", as well some ability increase "'''cast time'''", but other "'''casttime'''".
*[[Hath Perks]] - Dark Descent - "shards for '''reseting''' an item's"; should be '''resetting'''.
**"'''Halve''' the required"; should be '''halves''' to match the tense of the other perks.
*[[Monster Lab]] - "To activate this monster, you have to feed it enough Crystals to reach powerlevel '''100''' and give it a name."; should be '''25'''.
**"'''Insufficent''' Monster <food>"; should be '''insufficient'''.
*[[Battles]] - Combat log can show '''parrys'''; should be '''parries'''.<sup>[https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&showtopic=208589&view=findpost&p=5072975]</sup>


===[[Items]]===
==See also==
*Shielding Rune - Still says it is required to reforge Shield armor; this is misleading
*[[Known Bugs]]
*[[Crystal]] of Quintessence - Still says it increases monster's Soul resistance; this is misleading
*Scroll of Protection - In combat, is still listed in the battle items menu as "Scroll of Shielding"
*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Description should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
*[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] - Description should say "prize"; says "price"
*Infused Divinity - Missing a space on the weapon Enchantment screen; says "...with '''theelemental''' holy..."


===[[Abilities]]===
[[Category:Administrative]]

Latest revision as of 00:40, 1 March 2020

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

EHWiki

  • Hundreds of E-H links point to http://g.e; should be https://e
    • Several forum links are also missing HTTPS.

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's roughly 65500 (depends on whitespaces used, etc.)
  • The Invisible Power Broads © IPS, Inc. link goes to http://www.invisionboard.com/ (defunct); should be https://www.invisionpower.com/
  • When Snowflake sends out Monthly Toplist Awards she refers to each item as a Ticket; should be Coupon.

Galleries

  • Term of Service - "Post photograpic material"; should be photographic.
  • Hath Perks - Ads-Be-Gone - Can no longer be toggled.
  • The tooltip for e.png on a gallery listing states "This gallery is expunged, deleted or replaced"; should not include deleted as those cannot be searched.
  • Archiver error message - "I will now wait for this file to finish"; should be It.

HentaiVerse

  • Abilities - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
    • Description of 2H Parry stays: "Increases your block when using the Two-Handed or Niten fighting style, scaling with your proficiency"; should be parry.
    • Some abilities use "increases/decreases", while other use "increase/decrease"; should be the same to match the tense.
    • Some description use "crit" term, while other "critical", as well some ability increase "cast time", but other "casttime".
  • Hath Perks - Dark Descent - "shards for reseting an item's"; should be resetting.
    • "Halve the required"; should be halves to match the tense of the other perks.
  • Monster Lab - "To activate this monster, you have to feed it enough Crystals to reach powerlevel 100 and give it a name."; should be 25.
    • "Insufficent Monster <food>"; should be insufficient.
  • Battles - Combat log can show parrys; should be parries.[1]

See also

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