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''This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.''
''This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.''


==E-Hentai==
==[[EHWiki]]==
*The [[Dawn]] message stopped using commas for [[credit]] amounts (compare [[Media:DawnM1.png|before]] and [[Media:DawnM2.png|after]])
*Hundreds of E-H links point to http://g.e; should be '''https://e'''
**Several forum links are also missing HTTPS.


==[[Forums]]==
==[[Forums]]==
*The error message "The maximum allowed length is '''102400''' characters." is false; it's '''65,531''' (?)
*The error message "The maximum allowed length is '''102400''' characters." is false; it's roughly '''65500''' (depends on whitespaces used, etc.)
*<s>The Invisible Power Broads © IPS, Inc. link goes to '''http://www.invisionboard.com/''' (defunct); should be '''https://www.invisionpower.com/'''</s>
*When Snowflake sends out Monthly Toplist Awards she refers to each item as a '''Ticket'''; should be '''Coupon'''.


==[[Galleries]]==
==[[Galleries]]==
*[https://e-hentai.org/tos.php Term of Service] - "Post '''photograpic''' material"; should be '''photographic'''.
*[[Hath Perks]] - Ads-Be-Gone - Can no longer be toggled.
*The tooltip for https://ehgt.org/g/e.png on a gallery listing states "This gallery is expunged, '''deleted''' or replaced"; should not include '''deleted''' as those cannot be searched.
*[[Archiver]] error message - "'''I''' will now wait for this file to finish"; should be '''It'''.


==[[HentaiVerse]]==
==[[HentaiVerse]]==
*The tooltips for the Goddess'/Yggdrasil's procs are misleading; they apply to '''all''' monsters during Triple Trio & The Tree.
*[[Abilities]] - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
*[[Grindfest]]'s description implies that it is endless; it ends at 1,000 rounds.
**Description of 2H Parry stays: "Increases your '''block''' when using the Two-Handed or Niten fighting style, scaling with your proficiency"; should be '''parry'''.
*Various tooltips do not update based on [[abilities]] (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
**Some abilities use "'''increases/decreases'''", while other use "'''increase/decrease'''"; should be the same to match the tense.
*Monster class descriptions (when making new custom monsters):
**Some description use "crit" term, while other "'''critical'''", as well some ability increase "'''cast time'''", but other "'''casttime'''".
**Daimon: "can bypass all defenses not '''specially''' enchanted to withstand it"; should be '''especially'''.<sup>[http://www.dailywritingtips.com/especially-vs-specially/]</sup>
*[[Hath Perks]] - Dark Descent - "shards for '''reseting''' an item's"; should be '''resetting'''.
**Sprite: '''faery'''; should be '''fairy''' (much more common spelling).
**"'''Halve''' the required"; should be '''halves''' to match the tense of the other perks.
**Sprite: "Their tiny size also '''make''' them difficult to hit them"; should be '''makes'''.
*[[Monster Lab]] - "To activate this monster, you have to feed it enough Crystals to reach powerlevel '''100''' and give it a name."; should be '''25'''.
**Undead: "...'''crushing''' or cutting off limbs works reasonably well" is misleading; Undead have 25 Crushing Mitigation.
**"'''Insufficent''' Monster <food>"; should be '''insufficient'''.
**(''Numerous''): Make references to soul damage; this does not exist anymore.
*[[Battles]] - Combat log can show '''parrys'''; should be '''parries'''.<sup>[https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?s=&showtopic=208589&view=findpost&p=5072975]</sup>
*The combat log refers to the bonus rewards in the [[Ring of Blood]] as ''[[Arena]]'' clear rewards.
*The [[ability]] Sorcery states that it reduces T1 [[spell]] cooldowns; they have none.
*The [[Enchant]] section states '''MoggleMail'''; should be '''MoogleMail'''.
*The [[Upgrade]] page states "'''Hover an''' upgrade"; should be Hover '''over''' an upgrade.
 
===[[Items]]===
*Monster Edibles and Cuisine - Imply that they are for higher [[level]] monsters; should be "[[power level]]" to avoid misleading players.
*Konata's Hair - says '''timotei'''; should be '''Timotei''', [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timotei it's a proper noun].
*The order of the items listed for the Item Shop Bot UI do not match the order of the [[Bazaar]]'s Item Shop or the Inventory UIs.


==See also==
==See also==

Latest revision as of 00:40, 1 March 2020

This article is for any spelling, grammatical, or other aesthetic errors in the E-Hentai.

EHWiki

  • Hundreds of E-H links point to http://g.e; should be https://e
    • Several forum links are also missing HTTPS.

Forums

  • The error message "The maximum allowed length is 102400 characters." is false; it's roughly 65500 (depends on whitespaces used, etc.)
  • The Invisible Power Broads © IPS, Inc. link goes to http://www.invisionboard.com/ (defunct); should be https://www.invisionpower.com/
  • When Snowflake sends out Monthly Toplist Awards she refers to each item as a Ticket; should be Coupon.

Galleries

  • Term of Service - "Post photograpic material"; should be photographic.
  • Hath Perks - Ads-Be-Gone - Can no longer be toggled.
  • The tooltip for e.png on a gallery listing states "This gallery is expunged, deleted or replaced"; should not include deleted as those cannot be searched.
  • Archiver error message - "I will now wait for this file to finish"; should be It.

HentaiVerse

  • Abilities - Various tooltips do not update based on activated abilities (e.g. Haste still says 25% even after investing AP into Better Haste).
    • Description of 2H Parry stays: "Increases your block when using the Two-Handed or Niten fighting style, scaling with your proficiency"; should be parry.
    • Some abilities use "increases/decreases", while other use "increase/decrease"; should be the same to match the tense.
    • Some description use "crit" term, while other "critical", as well some ability increase "cast time", but other "casttime".
  • Hath Perks - Dark Descent - "shards for reseting an item's"; should be resetting.
    • "Halve the required"; should be halves to match the tense of the other perks.
  • Monster Lab - "To activate this monster, you have to feed it enough Crystals to reach powerlevel 100 and give it a name."; should be 25.
    • "Insufficent Monster <food>"; should be insufficient.
  • Battles - Combat log can show parrys; should be parries.[1]

See also

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