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Titles - Commas still exist on higher ones after the word "evade"
Spiritual Proficiency - Will not show 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
Infusions - Described in The Forge as having 60 minute durations instead of 15
Raptor Jesus trophy - Consolatory price rather than Consolatory prize
Voidseeker Shard - Should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
Protection (both ability and spell) - Still lists its effect as based on armor
Monster's Bonus Stats - Does not list Attack Speed
All X-Abilities - Still state 25% improved action speed when it should be 10%

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 ==HentaiVerse==
-*Commas still exist on higher [[titles]] after the word "evade"
+*[[Titles]] - Commas still exist on higher ones after the word "evade"
-*Spiritual proficiency will not show 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
+*Spiritual Proficiency - Will not show 2 decimal places if it the value ends in .00
-*[[Infusions]] are described in [[The Forge]] as having 60 minute durations
+*[[Infusions]] - Described in [[The Forge]] as having 60 minute durations instead of 15
 *[[Obsolete_Items#Trophies|Raptor Jesus]] trophy - Consolatory '''price''' rather than Consolatory '''prize'''
-*Voidseeker [[Shard]] should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards.
+*Voidseeker [[Shard]] - Should have "the" before "Voidseeker's Blessing" to match the other shards
-*The Protection [[ability]]/[[spell]] still lists it as being based on armor.
+*Protection (both [[ability]] and [[spell]]) - Still lists its effect as based on armor
-*Monster's Bonus Stats do not list Action Speed.
+*Monster's Bonus Stats - Does not list Attack Speed
+*All X-Abilities - Still state 25% improved action speed when it should be 10%